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Kaiju I hate you!
You stepped on my Mercedes.
May you rot in hell!
You stepped on my Mercedes.
May you rot in hell!
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I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but the second line has one syllable too many; the classic form is five-seven-five, and your haiku currently has five-eight-five...if you drop the word "new" it would be perfect!
I will be happy and honored to allow your haiku into the gallery as soon as you edit it.
I will be happy and honored to allow your haiku into the gallery as soon as you edit it.